jerry-roberts's Reviews

[The Tweet Before Christmas]

that was hilarious thank you for making this XD i love the art and the message, good job

[Lemmen The Cat Speedpaint]

yeah, you need to make your linework less shakey, quick fluid strokes can really improve the look of any work, even with a mouse wich is all i use, you can find a way, not a bad attempt at cell shading, but with that you should still try to make the lines more fluid. you have a very nice anime - ish look but having consistant proportions and a better understanding of real anatomy will allow you to be able to exaggerate in a way that is more aesthetically pleasing to look at.

[The Waters Be Icey Matey 2]

nice improvements, add in some score system and a level systeming platform and this could become addicting

[Kill the Plumber]

oh my god i just got the 100 lives medal, it took some work replaying levels, but worth it.. i like this game alot

[Lum Invader]

man your lighting is all over the place, on the hand its up to the right, on the face and left arm its up to the right, on the body its straight on from the front and not that high... what makes it worst is the background, the white lines look like they have a drop shadow saying the light is up to the left.

all of the highlights are random... highlights should always reflect from a source and each one you have is a different shape pointing to a different direction. meaning you have no cohesion with your reflections. they confuse the image.

the neon in the back makes it worst, you have no edge lights on the character, making it feel like the background and the character are slapped on top of eachother instead of a scene. your shadow color is a solid reddish tone when shadow color is actually the ambiant light in a scene. which i guess is hard to figure out here. because of the abstract nature of it.

the anatomy is a bit off, when the knee is rotated inward that far the foot cant be facing forward... without force..

[TinkerBell and the Lost Treasure]

always liked the bumpy brush for things like this

TikkiToon responds:

hell yea bumpy brush

[Lilth Nudie]

you obviously have a very high understanding of the human body, and a great grasp on color, not sure if intentional but the shadows being filled with the same tint as the background or reflected light is very nice, but if you are having that wispy light be the main source or even a major source of light since it has reflection on the body than you need some deeper shadow opposite from the side of the light,

the nipple on the right side boob seems too high, that side of her body meaning also the pectoral muscle is more laxed than the left, and this would cause the boob to be less elevated than the left side but the nipple is higher on the breast making it look out of place.

last thing just a nitpick, the face is rather unappealing, since its facing down, having her nose slightly upturned like that makes it appear as if her nose is way to upturned almost like a skull, that with the parced lips is very unappealing, and you overdefine the muscles in the stomach, with her arm up like that it would pull the skin there more tightly making some of the shapes there much softer. maby even lose them all together, try some softer shading where the skin is pulled tought you may like the results :D

amazing eyes, good shape well defined,

this is simply a critique, no offense is meant, but i dont care how you take it, just the opinion of a fellow artist